OK, so here's the first episode of The Story Of Daffodil And Her Weird Dream. Well, tell me what you think!! Oh, and Daffodil's thoughts will be written in green so it's not confusing....:P
Daffodil walked down the street towards Aunty L's Smoothie Place. As she walked she could here the big bells inside the bell tower chiming 7:00. Usually Daffodil didn't like to get up so early, but she had a lot of thinking to do, and she always felt that the Smoothie Place was where to do it.
Why, she thought, did she keep having the same dream?! The one were she was at a llama farm, and then she had to put on a concert, and then she fell off the stage. It always confused Daffodil because she never really liked llamas, and she didn't know why she would be singing--Well, yes, her dream was to become a famous singer and all, but she didn't think she could do it. After all, she was only an eleven year old girl from Colorado. Did anyone famous every come from Colorado?! she thought. And then as she reached the doors of Aunty L's, she thought of something: Didn't stuff like this always happen to people in books and movies and stuff? Maybe, like, it's my fate, she was thinking excitedly. Maybe I will be a famous singer! Well, at a llama farm, but who cares?!
Then, as Daffodil ordered her usual, (Blueberry Blast) she saw a familiar face! It was Hayli Yae! Hayli was one of Daffodil's best friends. Her others were Portia Quimsby and Felicity Ranwall. I wonder what Hayli's doing here, Daffodil thought. Hayli usually didn't like coming here, because she was allergic to something they put in the smoothies.
Huh, Daffodil thought to herself, well, I'll go say hi! But then Daffodil noticed something even stranger--Hayli was wearing a baseball cap over her black bob hair that said, I <3 THE RB LLAMA FARM!!
You're pretty darn good at writing.
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